We analyzed 47 B2B software landing pages. Only 9 are worth stealing from.

We read 47 business software pages that were paying for Google Ads clicks, top to bottom. These 9 are the ones worth your time. Everything we found is here, free.

Curated from real Google Ads campaigns
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Stewart Dunlop
Stewart Dunlop / PPC.io

These are real B2B enterprise software pages spending actual money on Google Ads right now.

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47 landing pages screened

From real B2B enterprise software Google Ads campaigns in the US

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9 winners curated

The landing pages actually worth stealing from

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2 burning money

So you know exactly what to avoid

#2
monday.com
The hookA ticked list, then a sales callForm fields8Offer named up topNoRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkIn the footerStandout moveThe call agenda, written out
monday.com
monday.com
The overview

Talk to a monday CRM expert is a contact sales page, and it makes the trade honestly: a short list of what the call will cover, then a long form. There is no price, no trial and nothing named in return above the fold, so the form asks a stranger for everything while promising a conversation. The badge wall and the review count that would answer the trust question sit well below the first screen, under the fold.

The move worth copying

Build a contact-sales page that puts the form at the same visual level as a customer testimonial with photo and title, so the visitor reads the testimonial while their eyes are already on the form.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Ticked list sets the call agenda sets expectationseasy
    Explore the best CRM setup to hit your revenue goals

    A short ticked list says what the conversation covers: the setup, the pricing for your team size and the AI features. Booking a sales call costs your visitor diary time, and telling them what they get for it raises the number who do. Write out what your call covers.

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    Support link diverts the wrong leads form hygieneeasy
    For technical or billing support, visit our

    A line under the bullets sends existing customers with a billing problem to the help centre before they fill in the sales form. Everybody you catch there is a lead your team need not sift. Add the same line and watch your lead quality move without touching your ads.

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    Company size arrives as a dropdown qualifies the leadeasy
    Company size

    A dropdown beside the company name means the lead arrives already sorted into a segment, and the rep can prepare rather than spend the opening minutes asking. It costs the visitor a click, the cheapest field on the form. Make your qualifier a dropdown and never a free text box.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Cookie card lands on the only quote covers the pageneeds a developer

    The cookie card sits on the left of the first screen, on top of the customer quote, so the visible words start mid sentence with CRM. With monday. That quote is the only proof above the fold. Load your page in a private window and move whatever your banner covers.

  • Form asks for everything before it gives anything too many fieldsa sales call
    Tell us more about your team and what work you'd like to manage with monday.com

    First name, last name, work email, job title, phone, company name, company size and a free text box about your team. That is the largest ask of any winner here, on a page with no price and no trial. Put something concrete behind the button, or split it into steps.

  • Review badges wait past the form proof too lateeasy
    Based on 1,000+ G2 Crowd reviews

    A wall of review site badges and the review count sit under a heading further down, past the point where the form makes its long ask. The trust that would justify that form is on the page, in the wrong place. Move your badge row up beside the button.

The real ad we caught this page running
6 keywords
340 searches / mo
2 ad variants found
saleshandy lead finderbusiness plan ai generatorgoogle workspace india
#3
decagon.ai
The hookA category headline and a buttonForm fieldsNo formOffer named up topNoRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkIn the footerStandout moveA customer logo row you recognise
decagon.ai
decagon.ai
The overview

Decagon sells conversational AI agents to support teams, and its whole first screen is a headline, a Get a demo button and a product image. No form, no price, no proof. It earns its place further down, where the logo row runs Hertz, Notion, Eventbrite and Rippling, and a Rippling VP of Customer Support gives a named quote with a deflection figure beside it. The block under the logos is the problem: a long paragraph set in grey so pale it barely reads.

The move worth copying

Show a video demo of your product in action directly below the hero headline, so the enterprise evaluator can see the actual interface before deciding whether to request a live demo.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Logo band leads with consumer names proofhard to earn
    Hunter Douglas

    Hertz, Notion, Eventbrite, Rippling, Duolingo and Mercado Libre run in a single band under the hero image, consumer names rather than anonymous startups. A support director looking at AI agents wants to know somebody with real volume trusted this. Sort your logo row by who your buyer recognises.

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    Case study explains what was hard proofhard to earn
    Increase in deflection

    A VP of Customer Support at Rippling gives a long quote in his own words, with a deflection figure printed large beside it and a link to the full case study. Ask your customer what the problem looked like before you. The after picture is the easy half.

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    Hero shows the product inside a website shows the productone afternoon
    Get a demo

    Straight under the headline is a screen showing a hotel booking page with the chat widget open and a real question typed into it. A buyer who has never seen an AI support agent now knows what one looks like. If your product is invisible, show it inside somebody's website.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Grey paragraph barely separates from white broken rendereasy

    The block under the logo row, headed The Decagon difference, is set in a grey so pale against white that the words barely separate from the page. It is the section explaining why the product is built differently. Screenshot your longest paragraph and read it at arm's length.

  • Headline defines the category instead no differentiatoreasy
    The **conversational AI** platform for concierge customer experiences

    Every competitor could run that sentence unchanged, and the visitor typed the category into Google to get here. The customer figure further down would make a better headline than the definition does. Put the proof in the biggest type and let the category description be the subhead.

  • Demo buttons stand in for a form fewer ways inone afternoon

    There is no lead form anywhere on this page. Every route out is a Get a demo button handing the visitor elsewhere, and a researcher still comparing vendors cannot leave a name. Add a short form to the page you pay for, so the careful ones raise a hand today.

The real ad we caught this page running
9 keywords
18.8K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
chatbots customer serviceai customer careai customer services
#4
xurrent.com
The hookStop fighting firesForm fieldsNo formOffer named up topYesRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkNoneStandout moveEnterprise logos under the headline
xurrent.com
xurrent.com
The overview

Stop Fighting Fires. is the best headline in this file, and Xurrent puts it in yellow on deep purple with the Pfizer, Cisco, BMW and Volkswagen logos directly underneath. The band lower down turns the pitch into plain numbers with a line of English beside each. What the page never offers is a form. Every button on it, from the top bar to the closing section, opens somewhere else.

The move worth copying

Dedicate an entire visual section to analyst and review badges (G2, Gartner Peer Insights, GigaOm, Software Advice) arranged in a grid, so the enterprise buyer running a vendor evaluation can photograph or screenshot them for their internal presentation.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Headline names the feeling, then the fix positioningeasy

    The first line, "Stop Fighting Fires.", names the feeling the buyer had this morning, in bright yellow on deep purple, and the line under names the product that replaces it. The problem earns the attention, the product spends it. Write the sentence your customer would say after a bad week.

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    Enterprise logos ride in the first screen proofhard to earn
    trusted by leaders across the globe:

    Pfizer, HCA Healthcare, Cisco, Volkswagen Group, Deutsche Telekom, Fossil and BMW run directly under the hero, inside the first screen, on the same purple as the headline. Anybody buying IT service management for a regulated business reads that as permission. Do not save a logo that size for later.

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    Numbers each get a line of English makes it concreteone afternoon

    Each row carries a large figure on the left and a plain sentence on the right explaining what it means for you. Response time, ticket reduction and time to go live are the things a buyer defends to their own boss. Give each number a line of English.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Every route out is a button fewer ways inone afternoon

    There is no field anywhere on this page. Under "Stop Fighting Fires." every route out is a Get Started or Get a Demo button handing the visitor elsewhere. A buyer who reads now and decides later leaves no trace. Put a short form on the page you pay to fill.

  • Full site navigation sits on top too many exitseasy

    The header carries Platform, Resources, Partners, Pricing and Company, every heading a dropdown, plus a search icon and a language switch. That is the company website's navigation on a page you buy clicks for. Strip it to a logo and a single button.

  • Nine badges wait near the footer proof too lateeasy

    Review site badges, an analyst customers' choice, a certified tool mark and a best support award sit far down the page, under every feature block. Response time earns attention up top; in plain English, badges could too. Move a couple beside the headline.

The real ad we caught this page running
6 keywords
600 searches / mo
2 ad variants found
zendesk admin centerhappyfox tickethappyfox ticketing
#5
launchdarkly.com
The hookPlain bullets for developersForm fieldsNo formOffer named up topNoRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkNoneStandout moveDemo and sales sit side by side
launchdarkly.com
launchdarkly.com
The overview

LaunchDarkly runs a developer page and writes it like one: bullets that say what feature flags actually do, no adjectives, no manifesto. The hero pairs Get a demo with Contact sales so the ready and the researching both get a route. Then the cookie banner drops across the bottom of the screen and takes the next section's heading with it.

The move worth copying

Put an animated product UI mockup directly beside the hero headline so the technical evaluator clicking your ad sees exactly what they will be configuring in their first session, not a stock illustration of abstract teamwork.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Claims a developer can argue with clarityeasy
    Separate deploy from release.

    Short lines under the headline, each a technical claim rather than a benefit: separate deploy from release, roll back instantly, standardise the process. A developer reads those and either nods or objects, and both beat skimming. If your buyer is technical, write claims they could challenge and drop the adjectives.

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    Two speeds offered without hiding either fewer stepseasy
    Contact sales

    Get a demo sits as a filled button with Contact sales as plain text beside it, so the ready buyer and the one who needs procurement both get a route. Neither is hidden and neither shouts. Give your page two speeds and make the slower one look deliberate.

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    Rollout time answered with real code answers a worryone afternoon
    With a few lines of code, you can integrate your app and toggle your first feature flag on.

    Further down, a block prints the integration claim in huge type with real code beside it, then names the languages and frameworks supported. The worry with a developer tool is not price, it is how long the rollout will eat. Answer with a number and show the code.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Banner lands on the second section covers the pageneeds a developer

    The cookie notice runs the full width at the bottom of the first view, and the heading it lands on belongs to the section explaining what feature management does. A first time visitor meets that block before your argument. Load your page in a private window and move it.

  • Customer count waits at the bottom proof too lateeasy
    Join over 5,500 customers from startups to enterprise.

    The customer count and the logo wall carrying Fox, GM, Dior, Hulu, NBCUniversal, Santander and HP sit at the very bottom, after every feature block. That is the strongest thing here and the last thing anybody sees. Put the count and a few logos under your headline.

  • No field anywhere on the page fewer ways inone afternoon

    Get a demo, Contact sales and Get started for free are the exits, and every route is a button to somewhere else. On a paid click the visitor who wants to read now and decide next week leaves no trace. Add a short form beside the customer logo wall.

The real ad we caught this page running
5 keywords
620 searches / mo
2 ad variants found
feature togglesfictive studios
#6
gong.io
The hookAn email box and nothing elseForm fields1Offer named up topNoRating you can see on arrivalYesCredential you can checkUp topStandout moveAnalyst scores under the form
gong.io
gong.io
The overview

Gong asks for a work email and nothing else, and it is the shortest form in this file by a distance. Directly under the form sit analyst and review badges with their scores printed underneath, from Forrester, Gartner, TrustRadius and the review site every software buyer already reads, which is the only first screen here that answers who says so before you scroll. The rest of the page then repeats the same argument, with a different customer figure each time.

The move worth copying

Run a short hero video clip of your actual product dashboard (not a lifestyle reel) and pair it with a named-customer stat bar immediately below. The comparison-stage buyer needs both the 'what does it look like' answer and the 'what results can I expect' answer in the first viewport, and this page gives them both in one scroll.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Form asks for one work email fewer stepseasy
    See Gong Engage in action

    Work email, a submit button and a consent tick. That is the whole form, the shortest here by a wide margin. Everything beyond an email can be asked on the call, and every field you cut is a percentage who finish. Try the shortest version you can bear.

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    Analyst scores print under the button proofhard to earn

    A badge row sits beneath the submit button, Forrester Wave Leader, Gartner Peer Insights, Best Software and TrustRadius Top Rated, each with its score printed underneath in large type. Every badge you have is on somebody else's site already. Bring the scores across. Logos on their own say little.

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    Each section carries its own customer figure makes it concreteone afternoon
    88%boost in response rates

    Every feature block ends with a named customer logo and a single figure: accuracy, response rates, pipeline growth. Different section, different customer, different number. Rather than one testimonial wall, attach a separate customer's result to each thing your product does.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Headline shouts in full capitals hard to readeasy
    Sales prospecting reimagined with AI

    The headline renders in full capitals across the width of the hero, slower to read than sentence case and landing as shouting at this size. The words are fine and the styling fights them. Use size and weight for emphasis, and check it on a phone.

  • Category claim arrives without a source weak proofeasy
    Gong Engage — the \#1 sales prospecting platform

    Halfway down the page a heading declares the product top of its category, with nothing beside it saying who decided that. This is the same page printing real analyst scores in the first screen. Every superlative needs a body and a date beside it, or it comes off.

  • Same argument runs three times loses focusone afternoon

    The middle runs feature blocks making broadly the same case with a different customer figure attached, then a feature grid of tiles, then the same email form at the foot. Cut the weakest of your repeated sections and put an objection you have never answered in its place.

The real ad we caught this page running
11 keywords
700 searches / mo
2 ad variants found
referralherofinlistics
#7
tipalti.com
The hookBullets on the left, form on the rightForm fields4Offer named up topNoRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkUp topStandout moveA table that names the competition
tipalti.com
tipalti.com
The overview

Tipalti Book a demo puts the qualifying bullets on the left, a short form on the right and a row of review site award badges along the bottom of the hero. Further down it does the thing almost nobody in this file has the nerve to do: it names PayPal, Payoneer and Trolley in a feature table and marks the boxes. That table is the reason this page is on the list, and the empty yellow block sitting above it is the reason it is not higher.

The move worth copying

Below the hero form, drop a head-to-head comparison chart that names your top competitors and shows where you win across the metrics a finance buyer actually tracks (fee structure, currencies supported, compliance coverage). Most software pages only claim superiority. Tipalti shows it.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Table names three rivals outright positioningone afternoon
    How Tipalti shapes up for global pay solutions

    PayPal, Payoneer and Trolley are named in the column headings, and the rows are marked with ticks, crosses and the word Limited. Nobody else in this file will name a rival. Your buyer builds this table anyway, so build it for them and pick the rows that matter.

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    Bullets carry figures and named standards clarityeasy
    International payment provider services to 200+ countries and territories in 120 currencies

    Beside the form runs a ticked list, each line carrying a figure or a named standard: countries and currencies, payment methods including SEPA and ACH, the payee portal, the tax forms by name. A finance buyer rules you in or out from those. Put your qualifying numbers in the hero.

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    Badges name the segment they cover proofhard to earn

    A row of review site badges sits at the bottom edge of the first screen, Leader Mid-Market, Leader Small Business and Regional Leader Americas, each stamped with its season and year. Naming a company size tells a small finance team this is not only sold to enterprises.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Pale yellow panel renders completely empty broken renderneeds a developer
    Eliminate inefficient and risky global online payments

    Under that heading and its subhead sits a large pale yellow panel with nothing in it, and the page continues as if a video had loaded there. It is among the biggest blocks here and it is blank. Scroll your page on a slow connection and note every empty space.

  • Best asset hides behind sideways scrolling hard to readone afternoon

    The comparison splits into cards in a horizontal carousel, so only part shows and the next card is cut off at the right edge with a scrollbar underneath. The best asset on the page is partly hidden behind a gesture most visitors will not make. Stack your comparison vertically instead.

  • Two dropdowns crowd a short form too many fieldseasy
    Industry

    The form asks for a work email, then an industry dropdown and a company size dropdown before the phone box. Both are questions the visitor must think about rather than type, and a list that long is slower than a text field. Keep the qualifier your team routes on.

The real ad we caught this page running
27 keywords
15.5K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
send money remittanceaccept the payment
#8
smartsheet.com
The hookWatch a demo, nothing elseForm fieldsNo formOffer named up topYesRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkNoneStandout moveNo header, so no way out
smartsheet.com
smartsheet.com
The overview

Smartsheet leads with Unify IT projects. Drive results. and offers exactly one thing, a Watch a free demo button, which is a lighter ask than a sales call and a real offer rather than a contact form. The capture shows no header bar at all, so there is no navigation to leak clicks. The award badges are near the bottom, and the privacy card lands across the second section.

The move worth copying

Put a real product dashboard screenshot in your hero pane and label three specific use-case tiles directly beside it ('project pipeline,' 'portfolio efficiency,' 'work smarter on AI'). The IT portfolio manager clicking your ad is comparing three tools in a spreadsheet. Your hero should show them what a single day of work looks like in yours.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    First screen asks you to watch the offereasy
    Watch a free demo

    The only thing the first screen asks is that you watch something, and the word free does real work beside it. A recorded demo lets a researcher get what they came for without booking their calendar. Offer a watchable demo alongside the bookable one and see which paid traffic prefers.

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    Page opens with no navigation bar fewer exitseasy

    This capture has no navigation bar of any kind. The page opens straight on the headline, with no menu, no logo link and no search to click away through. It is the cleanest page in this file. Strip your header to a logo and a button, then count the fills.

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    Copy names ServiceNow and Jira answers a worryeasy
    Create a single point of entry for all IT requests, even via third-party tools like ServiceNow and Jira.

    The first body section names ServiceNow and Jira rather than promising integrations in the abstract, and a logo grid repeats it with Zoom, Tableau, Box, Webex, Google, Jira, Microsoft, Salesforce and Slack. Name the tools your buyer definitely has, in the opening paragraph.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Privacy card swallows a section heading covers the pageneeds a developer

    The consent card, headed "Your Privacy", lands across the page just under the first screen and swallows the heading of the cross-platform reporting section, leaving the words for seamless reporting sticking out below it. The reader meets a legal notice mid-argument. Open your page fresh and see where yours sits.

  • Badges sit beside the closing button proof too lateeasy
    Award-winning project management software

    A row of review site badges, including Leader Enterprise and Easiest To Use, sits in a blue box near the foot, and the only thing after it is the closing demo button. On a page this short, proof should not arrive last. Move the badge row up to the hero.

  • Not one customer appears anywhere no proofone afternoon

    There is no customer quote, no name, no logo and no figure anywhere on this page. The integration grid shows software brands rather than customers, and the badges say what reviewers thought without any speaking. Put a named customer, with a job title and a result, above your demo button.

The real ad we caught this page running
11 keywords
13.4K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
construction softwarecollaboration platforms
#9
info.yardibreeze.com
The hookAward badges beside a friendly faceForm fields7Offer named up topYesRating you can see on arrivalNoCredential you can checkUp topStandout moveTestimonials right under the fold
info.yardibreeze.com
info.yardibreeze.com
The overview

Yardi Breeze runs the most old fashioned page in this set and it works anyway. Award badges sit on the green hero band, a smiling man in a green jumper stands beside the form, and the testimonials with faces and names start immediately under the first screen. The catch is the form itself, which asks for a great deal before anybody has been shown a single screen of the software.

The move worth copying

Place three named-customer quotes in a carousel directly below the hero form, each with a specific operational outcome (time saved, rent collected, tenant issues handled). Most vertical SaaS pages use anonymous testimonials. Named property managers with real role context ('Bret Cheney, RE Real Estate Services') convert skeptical owners faster than any feature list.

What to Steal 3 tactics
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    Award badges ride the hero band proofhard to earn

    They sit on the green band inside the first screen: Forbes, Capterra and Software Advice, plus the review site your buyer already reads, each carrying its year. Award badges that land level with the form get read. Put yours in the hero, at a size somebody can read.

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    Testimonials come second on the page proofone afternoon
    Real clients, real results

    The very next thing under the hero is a row of testimonial cards, each with a photograph, a name and the company the person works at. No feature tour first, no explainer. The visitor's first question after the offer is whether people like them use this. Move your testimonials up.

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    Two tiers laid out side by side choice architectureone afternoon
    Find the right fit for your business

    Panels side by side list what each tier includes, tick by tick, with the dearer one headed as everything in the cheaper plus more. That turns the visit from whether to buy into which to pick. Lay your tiers out level and let the reader choose between them.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • Three dropdowns precede the product too many fieldsone afternoon
    Primary Portfolio

    Full name, email, phone, company, then a primary portfolio dropdown, a portfolio size dropdown and a state dropdown, all before anybody has seen a screen of the software. The dropdowns are questions the sales team wants. Ask for the name and email now, and the portfolio detail on step two.

  • Grey band fades its own labels hard to readeasy
    See why thousands have made the switch

    The section under the testimonials renders as a flat grey rectangle with white icons and white labels, and the heading and labels are close enough in tone to fade. It is meant to be the reasons to switch. Screenshot your page in greyscale and check nothing disappears.

  • Widgets settle on the testimonial row covers the pageeasy

    A green Contact Us tab and a reCAPTCHA badge sit over the right hand end of the testimonial row, covering part of a card. A cookie icon is parked bottom left. All of it lands on your proof. Load the page and move whichever widget sits there.

The real ad we caught this page running
12 keywords
1.6K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
rent softwarebookerville
The moves that turned up again and again

What the software winners do

01 Strong visual storytelling 9/9 winners
02 Structured comparison formats 5/9 winners
03 Headlines that match search intent 5/9 winners
04 Transparent pricing and value 5/9 winners
05 Logos, quotes or badges above the fold 4/9 winners
Off the playbook, still working

Pages that break the playbook in interesting ways

Why wildcards matter. Not every good landing page follows the textbook. These pages go against the grain with an unconventional approach, unusual structure, or a creative angle that challenges assumptions about what works. They might not score highest on our framework, but they offer something worth studying.
Sponsoredkustomer.com
Customer Support CRM
All Channels, One Platform. Proactive customer engagement with Kustomer.
kustomer.com
kustomer.com
The move worth copying

Why this breaks the rules: Enterprise B2B convention says PPC landing pages should be focused and short. Kustomer builds a 7,500-word page that functions as a complete product evaluation document. This works because the AI customer service buyer needs to build an internal business case, and this page gives them everything they need in one URL they can share with stakeholders rather than sending them to 5 different pages.

What Makes It Work3 tactics
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    made personal

    Interactive product demo video ('See AI Agents in action') with a large play button and blue CTA on a yellow background creates a visual break that stands out against the surrounding product content

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    answers doubts

    The page addresses every stakeholder in the buying committee: technical evaluators get agent configuration details, support directors get ROI metrics, and CX leaders get customer experience positioning

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    reviews

    'Human-like solutions, every time' with specific multi-AI agent automation descriptions gives the technical buyer architectural detail while keeping the business buyer engaged with outcome language

What It Gets Wrong3 issues
  • wrong promise

    Cookie consent popup dominates the initial viewport with privacy policy text, pushing all product content below the fold before the visitor can see anything about AI agents

  • wrong promise

    7,524 words means the visitor searching for 'ai customer service agent' gets a product encyclopedia instead of a focused conversion page; the average PPC visitor scans for 15 seconds, not 15 minutes

  • no proof

    No enterprise logos visible above the fold; the page bets entirely on product depth rather than the customer names and badges that enterprise buyers use to shortcut vendor evaluation

The real ad we caught this page running
21 keywords
5.9K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
crm servicelive chat for customer supportai customer service agent
Sponsoredcreatio.com
Banking CRM | The #1 Banking CRM for 2025
Proven 2x faster user adoption compared to traditional heavy weight CRMs.
creatio.com
creatio.com
The move worth copying

Why this breaks the rules: Enterprise banking CRM should feel corporate and serious. Creatio uses playful red mascot characters throughout the page, mixed with actual product screenshots and analyst recognition. The contrast between the playful visual identity and the serious business content ('recognized as a Leader by Gartner and Forrester') creates a distinctive page that stands out from the sea of blue-and-white enterprise software pages.

What Makes It Work3 tactics
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    exact numbers

    Industry-specific page for 'banking CRM' matches the exact keyword intent with dedicated content about customer acquisition, loan origination, and banking compliance rather than a generic CRM page with banking mentioned once

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    credentials

    Analyst recognition ('Leader by Gartner and Forrester') appears in the ad copy AND on the page, creating ad-to-page message continuity for the enterprise buyer who clicked specifically because of the analyst endorsement

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    credentials

    Banking customer logos (HarborOne, GT Continental, OTP, Avidia, NASB) are mid-market banks that are the exact target customer profile, rather than aspirational Fortune 500 logos that might feel unreachable

What It Gets Wrong3 issues
  • extra steps

    No form on the page despite 122 total links; the only conversion path is 'Get a Demo' which links to a separate page, so a visitor you paid for at high CPCs has to click once more before any form appears

  • no proof

    The red mascot characters (visible in the hero and throughout) may undermine credibility with conservative banking IT buyers who expect gravitas, not whimsy, from their CRM vendor

  • too much at once

    Page has zero navigation links but 122 total links scattered throughout content sections, creating an overwhelming number of click paths away from the demo CTA

The real ad we caught this page running
14 keywords
10K searches / mo
2 ad variants found
banking crmcrm and bankingcrm bank
Sponsoredincident.io
All-in-One Incident Management - All-in-One Incident Tracking
Consolidate paging, RCA, status pages, and comms into one intuitive platform. Engineers love incident.io for its simple ...
incident.io
incident.io
The move worth copying

Why this breaks the rules: The conventional PPC playbook sends incident-management traffic to a product feature page with a demo CTA and hides pricing behind a gate. Incident.io runs the opposite experiment: they send PPC clicks directly to a pricing page with Free, Team ($25), Pro, and Enterprise tiers compared across 60+ features in a single scrolling table. The bet is that engineering buyers who self-qualify on price convert faster than the ones who have to book a call to find out if they can afford the tool.

What Makes It Work3 tactics
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    answers doubts

    A four-column pricing table with a Free tier labeled '$0 forever' removes the cost objection before the buyer asks, and the feature-by-feature comparison lets the technical evaluator find their specific use case (on-call schedules, Slack integration, post-mortems) without clicking into a separate docs page

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    answers doubts

    The 'Cheaper than downtime' headline directly above the table reframes the pricing conversation from 'how much does this cost?' to 'what does NOT having this cost?' This is the same rhetorical move cybersecurity vendors use to justify premium pricing, and it works here because incident tooling has identical stakes

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    reviews

    At the bottom of the page, the page stacks customer logos (Netflix, Etsy, Ramp, Ovo, Monzo, Linear) beside a case study on Etsy with a specific outcome, which adds enterprise credibility without pulling the visitor away from the pricing decision

What It Gets Wrong3 issues
  • no proof

    The hero lacks a customer quote or named case-study outcome above the pricing table, so the buyer who lands cold on the pricing page sees dollar figures before anyone has vouched for the product

  • too much at once

    The feature comparison table runs to roughly 60 rows before the customer logos appear, and there is no sticky nav or section jump, so a PPC visitor looking for a specific feature has to scroll through unrelated capabilities before finding it

  • no proof

    'Cheaper than downtime' is a clever frame but it is not reinforced anywhere else on the page with actual downtime cost data. Adding a single stat ('the average enterprise outage costs $540k per hour') would turn the headline from a pun into a proof point

The real ad we caught this page running
1 keywords
720 searches / mo
1 ad variants found
incident management system
The whole file in one table

Compare the winners

The same questions asked of every winner, so you can find the row that matches the traffic you are already buying.

PageThe hookForm fieldsOffer named up topRating you can see on arrivalCredential you can checkStandout move
#1ZoomInfoTrial terms under the form heading4YesNoNoneA named customer quote in the hero
#2monday CRMA ticked list, then a sales call8NoNoIn the footerThe call agenda, written out
#3DecagonA category headline and a buttonNo formNoNoIn the footerA customer logo row you recognise
#4XurrentStop fighting firesNo formYesNoNoneEnterprise logos under the headline
#5LaunchDarklyPlain bullets for developersNo formNoNoNoneDemo and sales sit side by side
#6GongAn email box and nothing else1NoYesUp topAnalyst scores under the form
#7TipaltiBullets on the left, form on the right4NoNoUp topA table that names the competition
#8SmartsheetWatch a demo, nothing elseNo formYesNoNoneNo header, so no way out
#9Yardi BreezeAward badges beside a friendly face7YesNoUp topTestimonials right under the fold

Read the keywords you are buying, then find the row that matches them. Somebody typing a competitor's name plus alternative has already decided to switch and wants the table that puts you beside them, which is why the Tipalti row matters. Somebody typing the category name is still working out whether this kind of software solves their problem, and needs the bullets and the logo row before they will consider a call. You paid the same for both clicks.

Take these to your copywriter

The copy bank

Lines lifted word for word off the pages above. We tell you whose page each came from, and one click copies it.

Lines that shrink the ask
"Free to start. 7-day trial. No credit card required."
zoominfo.com · printed under the form heading, where the doubt actually is
"Get tailored pricing for your team size"
monday.com · a ticked line that tells you what the call is for
"Watch a free demo"
smartsheet.com · the only button in the hero, and a lighter ask than a call
"Complete the form below, and we’ll contact you to schedule your personalized demo."
tipalti.com · says what happens next, which most demo forms never do
"For technical or billing support, visit our"
monday.com · sends existing customers away before they clog the sales form
Proof somebody else signed off
"We reduced sales response time from 20 minutes to just under 60 seconds."
zoominfo.com · in the hero, attached to a named VP at a company you have heard of
"Based on 1,000+ G2 Crowd reviews"
monday.com · the right line, sitting well below the first screen
"Trusted by 5,000+ customers"
gong.io · over the logo row, under the badges and the scores
"Join over 5,500 customers from startups to enterprise."
launchdarkly.com · at the very foot of the page, over the customer logo wall
"Leading industry analysts recognize Xurrent as a top IT service management solution"
xurrent.com · beside the badge wall, a long way down
Headlines that say something
"Flags for modern software delivery"
launchdarkly.com · names the product category and the buyer, and nothing else
"Separate deploy from release."
launchdarkly.com · a claim a developer can argue with, which is the point
"Simplify global payments at scale"
tipalti.com
"Unify IT projects. Drive results."
smartsheet.com
"Refreshingly"
info.yardibreeze.com · the first word of the headline, and the whole positioning
Before and after
Their lineThe conversational AI platform for concierge customer experiences
Try instead"Rippling deflected 32% more support tickets with our AI agents. See how in a 20-minute demo."
decagon.ai · our rewrite, using the figure already on their own case study card
Their lineTalk to a monday CRM expert
Try instead"Talk to a monday CRM expert. Based on 1,000+ G2 Crowd reviews, and we will price it for your team size on the call."
monday.com · our rewrite, moving their own review line up from below the fold
Their lineClean, Accurate B2B Data You Can Trust
Try instead"Enrich from 500M+ verified contacts. Free to start, 7-day trial, no credit card."
zoominfo.com · our rewrite, both halves lifted from their own first screen
Their lineBook a demo
Try instead"Book a demo. We will show you the same table that puts us beside PayPal, Payoneer and Trolley."
tipalti.com · our rewrite, using the comparison they already publish further down
The other end of the file

2 pages burning ad spend with fundamental issues

⚠️ www.your-b2b-enterprise-software-landing-page.com
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Contact Us
Weak CTA
No Logos or Quotes
Wall of Text
Generic Headline

Every click to these pages costs real money. We found pages with no logos or customer quotes anywhere, mismatched intent, weak CTAs, and messaging that ignores what the searcher actually typed. Here is what to avoid.

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6262239.extforms.netsuite.com
6262239.extforms.netsuite.com
Why this wastes ad spend

NetSuite is spending on 'netsuite' (135,000 monthly searches) and 'erp software' (49,500) and landing visitors on a page where a cookie consent modal covers the form and hero. The page below the modal has 142 words total and 4 generic benefit icons. At Oracle-level CPCs, every visitor who clicks 'View and change cookie preferences' instead of scrolling past the modal is a lost conversion.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • extra steps

    Cookie consent modal covers the entire hero and form on initial load; the visitor sees a wall of privacy text with three buttons before they see any product content or the conversion form

  • too much at once

    The page has only 142 words of actual content and 9 total links, which means the visitor who scrolls past the cookie wall finds almost nothing to evaluate before being asked to 'Get your product tour today'

  • wrong promise

    The URL itself (6262239.extforms.netsuite.com with a 200-character query string) looks like a phishing link, undermining the trust that the Oracle/NetSuite brand should provide

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datasite.com
datasite.com
Why this wastes ad spend

Datasite bids on 'virtual data rooms for m&a', 'secure virtual data room', and 'deal room software' (high-intent M&A terms with $30-$80 CPCs) and sends those expensive clicks to a split-screen page that asks for 16 form fields before the visitor has seen a single customer logo, case study, or product screenshot. A cold-traffic M&A buyer comparing three VDR vendors is asked to commit more info upfront than most enterprise vendors ask after a first call.

What's Broken 3 issues
  • too much at once

    Sixteen-field form (business email, phone, country, state/province, company, organization type, plus name fields) asked up-front of cold traffic. At M&A-vertical CPCs, each additional field past field four cuts conversion roughly in half. Most of these fields belong after the demo is booked, not before

  • missing proof

    The hero headline 'A better data room. For better dealmaking.' is a generic superlative that names no differentiator. The buyer already searching 'virtual data rooms for m&a' wants to know what makes Datasite different from Intralinks or Firmex, not a tautology about better data rooms leading to better deals

  • looks off

    No product screenshot, case study, or named-outcome appears above the fold. The only visual is a stock photo of someone with a laptop, which is indistinguishable from a Fiverr template and undercuts the premium positioning the domain is trying to claim

Analysis

What we learned

01

Enterprise logo bars need recognizable brands tied to a specific claim, not generic customer counts

ZoomInfo shows Solaris +54%, Apple +43, Agora 10%, SurveyMonkey with specific percentage-improvement stats beneath each logo. Decagon shows Notion, Duolingo, Rippling, Eventbrite, Hertz, Affirm. Xurrent stacks Pfizer, Cisco, Volkswagen, BMW, Deutsche Telekom. Gong pairs 5,000+ customers with LinkedIn, Kelly, Upwork, Canva logos. LaunchDarkly closes with Fox, Ally, Hulu, NBCUniversal, HP, Atlassian. The enterprise buyer thinks 'if Pfizer trusts this, my CIO has cover to say yes.' Generic 'trusted by 35,000 businesses' without specific names does not carry that weight.

zoominfo.comdecagon.aixurrent.com
02

Named customer quote with title, company, and a quantified outcome beats a logo bar or a badge row above the fold

ZoomInfo places Ksenia Kouchnirenko, VP Business Systems at SurveyMonkey, with a specific metric ('reduced sales response time from 20 minutes to just under 60 seconds') directly beneath the hero. Monday.com uses James Arnold, COO at Cenversa. Gong features a named Senior Sales Operations Manager from Engine with '5x increase in sales productivity.' These compressed case studies answer 'has someone like me actually gotten results?' inside the first viewport. Unnamed testimonials do not.

zoominfo.commonday.comgong.io
03

Analyst badges (G2, Gartner, Forrester, GigaOm) compress months of vendor evaluation into one glance

Xurrent stacks 9 badges in one section including G2 Momentum Leader, Gartner Peer Insights Customer's Choice, GigaOm Leader, Software Advice Best Customer Support. Monday.com shows 7 G2 badges. Smartsheet has 6 G2 Crowd badges plus 'Users Love Us.' Creatio leads its ad copy with 'recognized as a Leader by Gartner and Forrester.' For the comparison-stage enterprise buyer running a structured evaluation, these badges shortcut the 'is this vendor legitimate?' question that would otherwise take weeks of analyst report reading.

xurrent.commonday.comsmartsheet.com
04

Stripped navigation on PPC pages is table stakes, not a differentiator. At $30-$100 CPCs every nav link is an exit ramp

Every winner in this set either removes navigation entirely or reduces it to a minimal logo and primary CTA. Monday.com's contact-sales page has only 13 total links. Tipalti's PPC variant has a form pinned top-right with a clean hero below. LaunchDarkly holds nav to a single 'Book a Demo' button. The losers do the opposite. NetSuite loads with a cookie consent modal covering the form on first paint. Datasite pairs generic stock imagery with a long two column form and buries the Goldman Sachs logo row below the cookie bar.

monday.comtipalti.comlaunchdarkly.com
Bottom line

Winners treat PPC traffic as a dedicated audience with a dedicated page: stripped nav, form or demo CTA above the fold, named enterprise logos with outcome metrics, and a customer quote that a CFO could verify on LinkedIn. Losers bet on commitment before proof.

If your pages look like the losers here, that's fixable - hire the team behind this teardown to rebuild the funnel end to end.

A page built from these patterns fixes half your funnel. The other half is the account sending it traffic - we manage both for SaaS teams.

Do these this week

What the software winners taught us

The pages that win here shrink the ask and put somebody else's word on the screen before anybody scrolls. The ones that lose spend the whole first screen describing a category the visitor already searched for.

  • 1

    Shrink the first ask and say what happens next. Gong takes a work email and nothing else, and Tipalti tells you in the form's own subhead that somebody will contact you to schedule the demo. Every field you add is another reason to leave and compare, and a buyer evaluating rival vendors this afternoon will fill in the shortest form first. Ask for the smallest thing that lets your sales team do their job, then earn the rest on the call.

  • 2

    Put somebody else's word on the first screen. Most of these first screens carry no rating and no review count at all, and business software is the one industry where the badges are easy to get. Gong prints its analyst and review scores directly under the form, so the question of who says so is answered before the visitor has scrolled anything. Almost every other page in this file has the same badges and keeps them under the fold, where they do nothing for a click you paid for.

  • 3

    Name your competitors and mark the boxes. Tipalti puts PayPal, Payoneer and Trolley in a table beside itself and ticks the rows. That is the page a switcher was already trying to build in a spreadsheet, and doing it for them means you get to choose the rows. Nobody else in this file does it. If you are worried about naming a rival, remember your buyer already has a comparison article open in another tab and somebody else wrote that one.

  • 4

    A headline that names the category is not a headline. The conversational AI platform for concierge customer experiences tells a visitor nothing they did not know when they typed the search. LaunchDarkly gets it right in a handful of words, Flags for modern software delivery, and then bullets a developer can agree or disagree with. Write the sentence your best customer would use to explain you to a colleague, and put that in the biggest type on the page.

  • 5

    Load your own page in a clean browser and look at what covers it. The cookie banner on the LaunchDarkly page swallows the next section's heading, the privacy card on Smartsheet lands across the second block, and the monday cookie card sits over the left half of its own testimonial. None of those show up in a design review, because the designer's browser accepted the cookies months ago. Open yours in a private window, on a phone as well, and see what a first time visitor actually meets.

  • 6

    Confirm the page renders, not just that it exists. There is a long stretch of white in the middle of the ZoomInfo capture where a section did not load, a pale yellow block on Tipalti with nothing in it, and a paragraph on Decagon set so light it barely reads. Each of those pages passes any test that checks whether the markup is there. Scroll your own page top to bottom on a slow connection and look at it, because a section that fails silently costs you the same money as one that never existed.

Your turn

Score your own software landing page

Every line below came off a screenshot somebody sat and counted. Open your own page beside it and tick what it already does.

Your page covers0 of 13
A trial, a demo or a named package in the first screen, not just a contact button 4 of 9
Form asks 4 fields or fewer 3 of 5
A certification, an analyst rating or a licence a stranger could go and verify, before they scroll 3 of 9
A score or a review count visible the moment the page loads 1 of 9
A lead form somewhere on the page, so the ones who will not book a call can still raise a hand 5 of 9
A named customer, with their job title and their company, in the first screen zoominfo.com quotes a VP by name
Your competitors named in a feature table, with the boxes marked tipalti.com names them and ticks the rows
A headline that names what the software does, not the category it sits in launchdarkly.com names the job
Customer logos your buyer would recognise, above the fold rather than at the foot xurrent.com runs them under the headline
Faces and names on your testimonials, starting straight under the first screen info.yardibreeze.com shows them immediately
Your cookie banner checked on a real load, so it is not sitting on your own copy Open it in a fresh browser
Every section on the page confirmed to actually render, not just to exist in the code Scroll the whole thing
You clicked your own ad this week and watched where it lands Do it today
Nothing ticked yet. Work down the list and stop at the first line you cannot claim.
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